Sample Essays 3

I read C for Cecil, D for Danforth, and E for Eunice. My favorite was D for Danforth because I like the topic the student chose. The student is able to contrast the two novels withoug making the essay without making it sound too convolunted. The student's introduction gives the reader focus on what the essay is going to be about without going into all the individual details. I really like the title of the essay because it is short and catchy, "Faulty First Impressions." Contrastingly, C for Cecilia's title is rather long for a title and maybe gives away too much of the point of the essay. In my opinion the title of the essay should be focused yet intrigue the reader to find out more about the topic my reading the essay.